I apologize in advance, because the text is going to be a little long and my writing in English is not the best.
I really liked VN, the theme of VN initially gives the impression that it is very generic, but... No, the relationship between the heroes brings a feeling of friendship that is very nice to read, the villains have not yet been very well developed, but reading the documents that the Baron put on the flash drive, I could see that the Super-Nova universe has a lot of history to be worked on, thinking about seeing Nick fight these villains makes me excited. There's an image that, in my opinion, was very strange, which is Vince driving the car, but on the other hand, there's the Templar scene and the Baron's superhero outfit, which are incredibly well designed (and it took me 1 hour to realize the eyes of the Baron's mask move) so I say that in general, the art is very very very good.
I loved the references of Nick's phrases, it brings him an air of reality, since cultural references (like him calling Mnesis Yoda) but I admit that the reference that made me laugh the most was the news that it has an NMF reference.
In short, I appreciate the opportunity to read this stupidly well done visual novel, you can feel the affection used in the project and I wish you to achieve the success that this VN deserves!
I can't figure out Frank, I get the feeling he has some sort of trauma. I hope he can work through his issues. Also, is it me or did Nick get a whole lot more confident? Its good to see him adjusting positively to his new situation. I also wanted to mention I like the new edits to the game, it somehow looks fresher than it did before. 😃😃😃
Personal theory here but I'm guessing Frank didn't get a choice about having powers or being a super hero, leading him to resent the job but still do it and getting frustrated when you don't seem to take it seriously or realize the dangers of the job.
There will be be sex, if it fits the story. There are plans for it, but don't take that as a promise: I'll include those scenes only if they still fit the narrative.
Unfortunate side effect of starting from a save. Scroll back a bit until the beginning of the scene and it should be fixed. If not, try skipping from the beginning. Sorry for the inconvenience!
Just wanted to say that the beginning has really captivated me, and has left me feeling that I've stumbled upon something that has the potential to be amazing. Can't wait to see this project grow.
I just finished and man it was awesome, we barely knew templar and managed to make me sad :'3, also superfang is cute and my favorite so far, keep it up cant wait to see more of this vn!
I really wonder what is Lucas' role going to be moving forward? Personally I think sooner or later he will figure you're the new Templar, he has too many of the dots in front of him to not connect them. What does everyone else think?
As fun as that would be to write, unfortunately I have to keep the scope of the project contained, since I'm a solo writer. A straight up villain route is very unlikely to happen.
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this is so awesome
I apologize in advance, because the text is going to be a little long and my writing in English is not the best.
I really liked VN, the theme of VN initially gives the impression that it is very generic, but... No, the relationship between the heroes brings a feeling of friendship that is very nice to read, the villains have not yet been very well developed, but reading the documents that the Baron put on the flash drive, I could see that the Super-Nova universe has a lot of history to be worked on, thinking about seeing Nick fight these villains makes me excited. There's an image that, in my opinion, was very strange, which is Vince driving the car, but on the other hand, there's the Templar scene and the Baron's superhero outfit, which are incredibly well designed (and it took me 1 hour to realize the eyes of the Baron's mask move) so I say that in general, the art is very very very good.
I loved the references of Nick's phrases, it brings him an air of reality, since cultural references (like him calling Mnesis Yoda) but I admit that the reference that made me laugh the most was the news that it has an NMF reference.
In short, I appreciate the opportunity to read this stupidly well done visual novel, you can feel the affection used in the project and I wish you to achieve the success that this VN deserves!
How tall are the main characters? Is Nick shorter than the rest? 🤔🤔🤔
We might post an official height chart soon. For now, I'll say that Nick isn't the shortest, no. That would be Mnesis.
Mnesis might just be my favorite. 😃😃😃
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I can't figure out Frank, I get the feeling he has some sort of trauma. I hope he can work through his issues. Also, is it me or did Nick get a whole lot more confident? Its good to see him adjusting positively to his new situation. I also wanted to mention I like the new edits to the game, it somehow looks fresher than it did before. 😃😃😃
Yeah... I'm sure he's a perfectly no traumatized boi.
Personal theory here but I'm guessing Frank didn't get a choice about having powers or being a super hero, leading him to resent the job but still do it and getting frustrated when you don't seem to take it seriously or realize the dangers of the job.
I feel inclined to think your theory is correct.
Is Build 0.4 still going public today?
Today. Very soon.
is this NSFW?
Maybe in the future builds. But for now, there are no explicit scenes
Hey, I think this is just me, but I think that Dr. Scion has a thing for "tentacles/vines" 😏😏😏😂😂😂
Have Nick use the gym while wearing the regen armour and you'll have a bara racoon in no time
He doesn't even need to wear the armor, the bracelet is enough!
It'll actually be suggested to him by a certain someone haha. Clever that you came up with it too, nice
Mmhh~
Are you a gay?
No comment
*Pssst* Rotshild I was wondering if you were ok with commenting about another VN on here?? Its one you're familiar with. 🤔🤔🤔
Might not be the best place here, but I wouldn't mind answering any questions on twitter or discord
This is why I ask first. 🙂🙂
Just finished playing it and like it look foward to playing the next update
I just realized that Mnesis' phone is pink!! That is an adorable detail to add. 😍😍😍
Hey2x not bad very nice breath taking novel.. hhhha NEW READER HERE hmm :)
if baron punched me i would thank him
Regarding matute content, are we talking about blood and stuff or also lewdness? :3
There will be be sex, if it fits the story. There are plans for it, but don't take that as a promise: I'll include those scenes only if they still fit the narrative.
I figured that Baron was a panda, I don't know why though. 😅😅
You know the art-style is SO good when Daniel is staring at your very soul. I had a hard time reading this scene.😨
UwU
Nick sprite appear in middle of text, is it only me ? Android build :3
Unfortunate side effect of starting from a save. Scroll back a bit until the beginning of the scene and it should be fixed.
If not, try skipping from the beginning. Sorry for the inconvenience!
the download button is still missing for me
Should be fixed now!
yup thank you so much!
I only see the downloads for linux and android
Something wonky with itch, I believe it should be fixed. Apologies!
No problem! Itch was being weird for me as well, thank you for your hard work!! :)
Not to sound impatient, but is the new build coming out soon?? 😃😃🤔🤔
Build 3 will go public next Saturday
It will be a nice birthday present. 😃😃😃
Just wanted to say that the beginning has really captivated me, and has left me feeling that I've stumbled upon something that has the potential to be amazing. Can't wait to see this project grow.
Thank you very much for the kind words. We're certainly excited for the future of the project =)
if Templar has children, are they gonna be at the funeral?? cuz that sounds kind of awkward...
We'll find out soon haha.
this is not a story of heroes… whoops wrong visual novel
Will there be another CG with the main character in it? 🤔🤔
Yes. He will also be getting a side image soon.
What do you mean when you say this VN will have mature content? Are we talking blood and swearing or any explicit material also?
There will (most likely) be explicit content.
I have a question before installing this. Who is the protagonist? A human or a furry?
The protagonist is a furry, specifically a raccoon.
Is Baron going to be a romance option?
Yes, he is one of the characters who'll be getting his own route.
Holy shit dude! That was intense! BTW, Vince is so adorable! Frank is really nice too 😁
I'm getting impatient for the next update. I want to know what happens next!!! 😃😃😃😂😂😩😩😩
this is an interesting and unique vn, i like it so far, also mneesus is cute bean
Nice 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
WHen the next update starts?
good game btw the tiger was 🔥🔥
Thank you💕! The next update should be in early Jan for the Patrons :-)
I barely just played this game why am I already getting attached ... AND WHY IS THE TIGER SO FUCKING HOT THIS IS ILLEGAL -
UwU
thank you for making the tiger hot though nglI just finished and man it was awesome, we barely knew templar and managed to make me sad :'3, also superfang is cute and my favorite so far, keep it up cant wait to see more of this vn!
Really happy to hear that you're enjoying the story!
A lot!!!!
I really wonder what is Lucas' role going to be moving forward? Personally I think sooner or later he will figure you're the new Templar, he has too many of the dots in front of him to not connect them. What does everyone else think?
One can only hope Lucas is a complete himbo XD
Where can i listen to the main menu's music? I love it
All music is found in the "audio" folder in the game files.
Are they custom-made?
Two of the tracks, listed in the devlog, are original to us. The rest are royalty-free tracks.
I wonder if there will be a system where based on the choices will determine if Nick becomes a hero, an anti-hero, or a villain
As fun as that would be to write, unfortunately I have to keep the scope of the project contained, since I'm a solo writer. A straight up villain route is very unlikely to happen.
A question, the MC its a human ?
The protagonist is a raccoon. There are no humans in this world.
Development is going well thus far, looking forward to the future updates
Best of luck to you mate! ^ v^
Thank you!
I wonder what Baron looks like underneath that mask? 🤔🤔🤔
You'll have to keep reading to find out haha
I already had that planned. 😃😃😃